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If you'd like me to critique one of your pieces then please just send me a note. I think I'm mainly able to offer critique for literature pieces, but I will try for other mediums. If I can't write you a critique that I feel is of a good quality then I'll try my best to write you a good constructive comment.

I pay no attention to the popularity of a deviant, or the skill level of their other works when writing a critique. I won't even look at their other works until I've critiqued the piece in question in many cases, as I believe that a piece should be able to speak for itself and nothing else is relevant.

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small talk he doesn't do small talk; never has done in the seven-or-so years i've known him. he's a cut-to-the-chase kind of guy i met in a down-town pub. i'd been drinking – he hadn't – and he lent me an arm for the three miles home.
"irresponsible… alone… could have been hurt…” - the only snatches of his tirade i remember now.

we met again, a week later, in that same down-town pub. i bought him a drink - a thank you (soft, of course) - and basked in his approval at my own orange and lemonade. i once swore i’d never change for any man.

we got talking, there in the bar. the hum of the underage youths larki


17/06/11 - I got a DLD. :faint: I'm very happy and very surprised and very very grateful for both the help with improving this piece, and for the honour of such a feature.



13/09/11 - Second place in the prose category of the #transliterations Photocopier Contest. Seriously unexpected. <3

Letter to Love Dear You
– whoever you may come to be –

I'm scared of dreaming. I want to believe that you're real and that someday we'll walk the sands together with your arm looped casually 'round my waist and my head on your shoulder, like in the movies. I want to hear your laugh as sea-spray dances in the breeze.  I want so badly to believe that I'll embrace your touch, to the world a simple gesture, but you and I will still the echoing bells of my untrusting youth together.

I'm scared of falling; I'd be lying if I said I wasn't, even with you. You'll reel me in with endless conversations and your butter-wouldn't-melt smile that I'll make i


06/08/11 - A second DLD? This piece is far more personal to me. Thank you to *helice93 for suggesting it. :heart:

Background: spring bokeh by *halcyonshores



Reading List 2012

This is a list of things I plan to read (and is by no means exclusive). Things I have read are striked.

'The Lord of the Rings' - J.R.R. Tolkien
'The Waves' - Virginia Woolf
'Les Miserables' - Victor Hugo
'The Remains of the Day' - Kazuo Ishiguro
'To Kill a Mockingbird' - Harper Lee
'Catch 22' - Joseph Heller
'I Capture the Castle' - Dodie Smith
'Lord of the Flies' - William Goulding
'A Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man' - James Joyce
'The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night Time' - Mark Haddon
'The Bell Jar' - Sylvia Plath
'Frankenstein' - Mary Shelley
'Anna Karenina' - Leo Tolstoy
'The Woman Who Walked Into Doors' - Roddy Doyle
'We Need to Talk About Kevin' - Lionel Shriver
'Room' - Emma Donoghue
'Pride and Prejudice' - Jane Austen
'The Great Gatsby' - F Scott Fitzgerald
'Birdsong' - Sebastian Faulks
'Case Histories' - Kate Atkinson
'The hand that first held mine' - Maggie O'Farrell
'A Thousand Splendid Suns' - Khaled Housseini
'Martian Chronicles' - Ray Bradbury
'The God of Small Things' - Arundhati Roy
'A Week In December' - Sebastian Faulks
'The Night Circus' - Erin Morgenstern
'Name of the Rose' - Umberto Eco

[Please note me/leave me a comment/write in my shoutbox if you have any suggestions for me!]

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JOURNAL: Final Stretch

Journal Entry: Wed Mar 28, 2012, 8:34 AM



Personal Life

Heeey everyone!

It's sunny! This alone is enough to make me smile, but add the fact that I've just finished my final assignments of the term, and that I'm going home tomorrow and I'm positively buzzing.

I now have an entire month at home which I plan to fill with reading, working, revision, horse riding, laughing, friends, and writing. Not necessarily in that order.

On April 6th, I'll be heading off to London to meet my amazing friend, ~AslanFan, and I am so excited! :excited:

That's pretty much it for my life, but so far this year has been pretty good to me. :heart:


dA Related

I basically have no idea what's going on around here right now, because I haven't been very active at all.

I uploaded a random sunset photograph today, and I have some writing in the works, and plan to do some editing as well this month.

Oh! And NaPoWriMo which I feel obligated to attempt given that my month of relative freedom happens to coincide.


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  • Mood: Zest
  • Listening to: Gabrielle Aplin
  • Reading: 'Fun Home' - Alison Bechdel
  • Drinking: Tea <3

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Thank you to *helice93 for allowing me to use this lovely drawing as my devID :heart:
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I'm an 19 year old student from England. I am attending Exter University reading for a BA in English Literature. I'm here on deviantART to improve my writing with a goal to eventually being good enough to submit some work to magazines etc. in the hope of being published. I also have a strong focus on the community here at dA, and I am always willing to look at/read your work and leave comments/critiques - just drop me a line :)

If you want to know more about my personality then either talk to some people who know me, or get to know me yourself ;) I don't bite... often. :heart:
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:iconflummoxative:
~Flummoxative May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the :+watch: :heart: Really appreciate it. :) I've actually been meaning to check out your gallery; I've seen some of your works around. And btw, your username: Warriors fan? :laughing:

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Hi Teresa, thank you so much for the favorite! You are awesome. Have a good night! :heart: :tea:
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Mood: Affection =CJWilde May 2, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much for the :+devwatch:. :aww:

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Happy 2nd dA anniversary! <3

As if it was only yesterday that you made Hawkfrost drawings, or that we did the double meme. :D
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